The following are a selection of real undergraduate admissions essays with brief comments from myEssay.com.

• Family
  • As Much as He Could Live
    University of Chicago: Accepted
  • Untitled
    Yale University: Accepted
• Sports/Activities
  • Untitled
    Yale University: Accepted
• Idea Essay
  • Untitled
    Stanford University: Denied
• Self-Portrait
  • Untitled
    Harvard University: Denied